Reflection

In my essay for Mrs. Turner's class, http://morgantucker16.blogspot.com/2007/10/elevate.html Elevate, I had to show a special memory I had to use three types of brushstrokes. For my Scarlet Letter http://morgantucker16.blogspot.com/2007/10/scarlet-letter.html essay I compared the way the Puritans handled adultery in the Scarlet Letter, to the way God would've handled it. In Elevate, I talked about my experience at our first weekend event for my youth group and how it touched me spiritually. Using my three brushstrokes, helped me understand how to use them throughout my future essays. In my Scarlet Letter Essay, I described how the Puritans handled Hester Prynne's sin of adultery to the way God handled it to a woman caught in the act of adultery in John 8:1-11.

In my memoir I had to add a little more to it because it was too short. I also had to check my being verbs an eliminate some of them. I also had a lot of comma errors that I had to correct. In the Scarlet Letter essay, I had to make sure I was always in present tense because I wasn't in some parts of it, I had to explain why I chose on of my quotes from the Scarlet Letter, and I had to correct my use of commas.